Comments on: ‘दहकते सांसों से’ महावीर शर्मा http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Sat, 05 Jul 2008 16:53:08 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU By: Anoop Bhargava http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/#comment-113 Anoop Bhargava Fri, 23 Dec 2005 13:54:22 +0000 http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/#comment-113 From: "Anoop Bhargava" Aadarneeya Mahavir ji: aap ki ghzal 'Karvat" bahut hee acchi lagi . har ek sher khoobsoorat ban paDa hai lekin ye sher mujhe khas kar pasand aaya : Tirii nigaho.n ka aadii ban gaya huu.n, Jo har lamhe, har baat mei.n badaltii hai. aadar ke saath anoop bhargava From: “Anoop Bhargava”

Aadarneeya Mahavir ji:

aap ki ghzal ‘Karvat” bahut hee acchi lagi . har ek sher khoobsoorat
ban paDa hai lekin ye sher mujhe khas kar pasand aaya :

Tirii nigaho.n ka aadii ban gaya huu.n,
Jo har lamhe, har baat mei.n badaltii hai.

aadar ke saath

anoop bhargava

]]> By: Rajan {gareeb} http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/#comment-112 Rajan {gareeb} Wed, 21 Dec 2005 22:00:14 +0000 http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/#comment-112 From: "rajan" Date: Sat Nov 26, 2005 11:58 am Subject: Re: 'KARVAT' - Mahavir Sharma jaise ki pehle bhi humen sahara or honsla dete rahe hain aap or seekhne ko aapse bahut kuchh mila. or aaj jub aapki kavita padhi to dil ek ajeeb si khushi me lehar uttha. aapki kavitaon me maine ye paya hai k jaise aapki pehli line zindgi se ek sawaal hai or dusri line khud me ek jawaab. aapka aabhari Rajan {gareeb} From: “rajan”
Date: Sat Nov 26, 2005 11:58 am
Subject: Re: ‘KARVAT’ - Mahavir Sharma
jaise ki pehle bhi humen sahara or honsla dete rahe hain aap or seekhne ko aapse bahut kuchh mila. or aaj jub aapki kavita padhi to dil ek ajeeb si khushi me lehar uttha. aapki kavitaon me maine ye paya hai k jaise aapki pehli line zindgi se ek sawaal hai or dusri line khud me ek jawaab.

aapka aabhari

Rajan {gareeb}

]]> By: Guldehelve http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/#comment-111 Guldehelve Wed, 21 Dec 2005 21:54:33 +0000 http://mahavir.wordpress.com/2005/11/05/%e2%80%98%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%82%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a5%87%e2%80%99-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%b5%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%b0/#comment-111 From: "GULDEHELVE" Date: Sat Nov 26, 2005 10:45 am Subject: Re: 'KARVAT' - Mahavir Sharma adaab sub se pehle to mai mahavir sahab ka shukr guzaar hoN ki unhoN ne es grop mai shirkat ki aur apni qeemti ghazal bejh kar es grop ki ronaq ko badhaya.jis ka mai teyh dil se shukr guzaar hoN dostoN aaj kal kai parkar ki ghazleN kavitaeN nazmeN likhi ja rahi haiN jin mai 2 ghazloN ke roop bohot ayhmaiyat rakhte hai 1,,riwaaeti shyeri hai 2 jadeed shyeri kehlati hai mahavir sahab rivati ghaloN ke shensha haiN rivayat yaani parampar ,yeh bilkul us hi parkar chalti hai jis tarhaN hamare ghar ke bade bude purane khane purane andaaz se pakatethy aur un khanoN ki lazzat insaan ko ungliyaaNchaatne per majbur kar deti thi es hi tarha revayti andaaz mai aaj kal ghazal kehna purani parampara ko zinda rakhna hai jiska beda mahavir sahab jaise mahaan shyeroN ne udhha rakha hai aap ki ghazal ka har ek pehlu dil ke under ek tees se chodh deta hai her zyer apni zumme dari nabha rha hai yeh hi ek kavi ki mahanta ka sabut hota hai basheer badar sahab ne kiya khoob kha hai khath aisa likha hai ki nagine se jadheN ho woh haath ki jisne kabhi zewar nahi dekha mahavir ji ke shyeroN per charcha jari rahe gi aap apni postin bhi juld se juld likhiye guldehelve ----------------------------------------------------------- From: “GULDEHELVE”
Date: Sat Nov 26, 2005 10:45 am
Subject: Re: ‘KARVAT’ - Mahavir Sharma

adaab
sub se pehle to mai mahavir sahab ka shukr guzaar hoN ki unhoN ne es grop mai shirkat ki aur apni qeemti ghazal bejh kar es grop ki ronaq ko badhaya.jis ka mai teyh dil se shukr guzaar hoN dostoN aaj kal kai parkar ki ghazleN kavitaeN nazmeN likhi ja rahi haiN jin mai 2 ghazloN ke roop bohot ayhmaiyat rakhte hai
1,,riwaaeti shyeri hai
2 jadeed shyeri kehlati hai
mahavir sahab rivati ghaloN ke shensha haiN rivayat yaani parampar ,yeh bilkul us hi parkar chalti hai jis tarhaN hamare ghar ke bade bude purane khane purane andaaz se
pakatethy aur un khanoN ki lazzat insaan ko ungliyaaNchaatne per majbur kar deti thi es hi tarha revayti andaaz mai aaj kal ghazal kehna purani parampara ko zinda rakhna hai jiska beda mahavir sahab jaise mahaan shyeroN ne udhha rakha hai

aap ki ghazal ka har ek pehlu dil ke under ek tees se chodh deta hai her zyer apni zumme dari nabha rha hai yeh hi ek kavi ki mahanta ka sabut hota hai
basheer badar sahab ne kiya khoob kha hai

khath aisa likha hai ki nagine se jadheN ho
woh haath ki jisne kabhi zewar nahi dekha

mahavir ji ke shyeroN per charcha jari rahe gi aap apni postin bhi
juld se juld likhiye
guldehelve
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